Can someone check my introduction/thesis for a paper about communication in the Great Gatsby?

If you want the last sentence to be your thesis, it's pretty good. However, I would say Sentence number 1 or 4 could be your thesis as well.

I need singing tips?

Peach, wat you do is while you are singing, hold your nose and if you feel it vibrate your singing through your nose...so try nd make the vibration go away. That's what i do nd it helps me because i love to singing also!!!

Family Legal Issue: Custody of 16 year old?

My granddaughter had a fight with her mom and went to stay with her dad. He went to court and was given temporary custody. Now she and her mom have mended fences and wants to go back. Her dad won't let her even talk to her mom or brother. She'll be 17 in three months. What are her rights? Her mom's rights?

Why don't the Palestinians ever complain about...?

They have complained. You're merely selectively quoting. For example you use a quote from 1937 to back up a point that they rejected state-hood in 1917

Thawed frozen pizza, safe to eat?

My wife left one of my favorite frozen pizzas out on the counter last night. I suppose its been out for about nine hours. Is it still safe to cook and eat? There is both meat and veggies on it.

Why do we still treat people differently because of race?

yes you are right its 2009 n we should think positively i mean we all are humans our colors doesn't make us different from each other.

Everything on my computer is too wide for my monitor. HELP?!?

Right click the desktop (background) then go properties, settings and try different screen resolutions